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Want to become a "Idea Generator and A Director" . Better view inside my mind not in these words.
Want to Include everyone from Raj comics and a platform for spin offs of RC universe. Low Cost.
please sir- provide me proper suggestion and your reviews upon my storyline. JOSHUA- Reboot of Inspector steel please do have a look and tell your prospective, i have shortened as much as i can. in real it will have more Compelling , psychologically intruding and scientifically comprehensible. (Just bullet points ) Joshua - Soft Reboot. *Military Anti-Terrorist secret experiment upon human for humanoid solider and Mutants solider by merging DNA's. Scientist Brainwashed soldiers by providing them synthetic life. One experiment have its doubt over his life. *that subject from the Experiment ran from his artificial life given by "base camp." *"Subject-Joshua" killed his mother and Doctor in his care and Military forces bring Dhruv behind Joshua. ******************************************************************************* Past life of Joshua * Handicapped war veteran step ahead for an experiment for the sake of their nation. * "Project-Joshua" Has a wife and Parents * After running from the experiment, He come to know that his wife killed his parents and she's in Asylum. ********************************************************************************************* Present scenario *Joshua in the search of his past life come to Mumbai and covered by News while breaking into an Asylum. *"Doga" fights with Joshua but surprised by his abilities strength and speed. Joshua defeated Doga in the end but left him alive after breaking his bones by using his situational advantage. ************************************************************************************* Dhruv in Mumbai with Tiranga *Dhruv-Tiranga followed the traces of Joshua and again both are surprised by his abilities. "Major vyom" told them that joshua is a human with an skeleton of Machine and told them the whole technology based upon "Perfect soliders" * Dhruv's father get seriously injured due to Joshua. This act as Catlyst in the efforts of Dhruv Aganist Joshua. *Some how Dhruv and Tiranga get their hand over joshua by threatning him upon his mentally disable wife. ************************************************************************************ *Major Vyom unleashed his Mutant solider "Kobi" Mutanat soliders (way before in the past) - Just need 2-3 pages flashback * Meanwhile "Major Vyom" signing a contract with many physically and mentally strong people for their help on the name of Nation. One of them is a tribe leader who have the knowledge of all sorts of Martial arts and tremendous knowledge of using their surrounding. ( Also Maintaining an Army inside his tribe) * "Major Vyom" merged the DNA of Tribe leader with Wolves (wolves are the symbol of Tribe) * "Major Vyom" found all wolves are following "kobi" because they consider him someone among themselves but better. ********************************************************************************************** * Doga saved Joshua from dhurv and tiranga after an epic battle. * Doga told the whole story behind Joshua to Dhruv and tiranga but again captain Vyom manipulated the whole situation. * Final battle between Kobi - Doga - Dhruv and Joshua meanwhile Tiranga revealed that major Vyom killed the father of Dhruv and told everything how major Vyom killed the family members of veteran volenteer solider just to gain their whole focus upon being a Matyrs. Later he brainwashed them and Joshua is the only one who survived all the stages. But somehow a picture helped Joshua to doubt upon his artificial life. * "Major Vyom" Vanished with a note " - "Whole world is burning, India is burning faster and this world need people who can burn themselves without asking any question to save the world- we don't need heroes or paid soliders but Martyrs" ******************************************************************************************* After 6 months - * Dhruv Handshaking Joshua in a field and whispered "Welcome to POLICE Inspector Steel"with an Smile in Joshua's ears. * Kobi alone in Jungles of Assam , One day saw a girl - fiance of Tribe Leader. ( same girl same DNA same Likes-Dislikes) ********************** Tiranga - Dhruv searching "Major Vyom" find Documents relating "Parmaru" which tiranaga thinks absurd but Dhruv is serious while reading a report over mystcism of "snakes" and the document is 20 years old so may be this project is also somewhere between us. ************************************* the end Sir please have a look over this and provide your insight over this. We can directly connect the birth of Nagraj- Nagmani with this whole storyline.
Want to become a "Idea Generator and A Director" . Better view inside my mind not in these words.
Want to Include everyone from Raj comics and a platform for spin offs of RC universe. Low Cost.
please sir- provide me proper suggestion and your reviews upon my storyline. JOSHUA- Reboot of Inspector steel please do have a look and tell your prospective, i have shortened as much as i can. in real it will have more Compelling , psychologically intruding and scientifically comprehensible. (Just bullet points ) Joshua - Soft Reboot. *Military Anti-Terrorist secret experiment upon human for humanoid solider and Mutants solider by merging DNA's. Scientist Brainwashed soldiers by providing them synthetic life. One experiment have its doubt over his life. *that subject from the Experiment ran from his artificial life given by "base camp." *"Subject-Joshua" killed his mother and Doctor in his care and Military forces bring Dhruv behind Joshua. ******************************************************************************* Past life of Joshua * Handicapped war veteran step ahead for an experiment for the sake of their nation. * "Project-Joshua" Has a wife and Parents * After running from the experiment, He come to know that his wife killed his parents and she's in Asylum. ********************************************************************************************* Present scenario *Joshua in the search of his past life come to Mumbai and covered by News while breaking into an Asylum. *"Doga" fights with Joshua but surprised by his abilities strength and speed. Joshua defeated Doga in the end but left him alive after breaking his bones by using his situational advantage. ************************************************************************************* Dhruv in Mumbai with Tiranga *Dhruv-Tiranga followed the traces of Joshua and again both are surprised by his abilities. "Major vyom" told them that joshua is a human with an skeleton of Machine and told them the whole technology based upon "Perfect soliders" * Dhruv's father get seriously injured due to Joshua. This act as Catlyst in the efforts of Dhruv Aganist Joshua. *Some how Dhruv and Tiranga get their hand over joshua by threatning him upon his mentally disable wife. ************************************************************************************ *Major Vyom unleashed his Mutant solider "Kobi" Mutanat soliders (way before in the past) - Just need 2-3 pages flashback * Meanwhile "Major Vyom" signing a contract with many physically and mentally strong people for their help on the name of Nation. One of them is a tribe leader who have the knowledge of all sorts of Martial arts and tremendous knowledge of using their surrounding. ( Also Maintaining an Army inside his tribe) * "Major Vyom" merged the DNA of Tribe leader with Wolves (wolves are the symbol of Tribe) * "Major Vyom" found all wolves are following "kobi" because they consider him someone among themselves but better. ********************************************************************************************** * Doga saved Joshua from dhurv and tiranga after an epic battle. * Doga told the whole story behind Joshua to Dhruv and tiranga but again captain Vyom manipulated the whole situation. * Final battle between Kobi - Doga - Dhruv and Joshua meanwhile Tiranga revealed that major Vyom killed the father of Dhruv and told everything how major Vyom killed the family members of veteran volenteer solider just to gain their whole focus upon being a Matyrs. Later he brainwashed them and Joshua is the only one who survived all the stages. But somehow a picture helped Joshua to doubt upon his artificial life. * "Major Vyom" Vanished with a note " - "Whole world is burning, India is burning faster and this world need people who can burn themselves without asking any question to save the world- we don't need heroes or paid soliders but Martyrs" ******************************************************************************************* After 6 months - * Dhruv Handshaking Joshua in a field and whispered "Welcome to POLICE Inspector Steel"with an Smile in Joshua's ears. * Kobi alone in Jungles of Assam , One day saw a girl - fiance of Tribe Leader. ( same girl same DNA same Likes-Dislikes) ********************** Tiranga - Dhruv searching "Major Vyom" find Documents relating "Parmaru" which tiranaga thinks absurd but Dhruv is serious while reading a report over mystcism of "snakes" and the document is 20 years old so may be this project is also somewhere between us. ************************************* the end Sir please have a look over this and provide your insight over this. We can directly connect the birth of Nagraj- Nagmani with this whole storyline.
